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This was truly beautiful. I loved the story, the colors and shape language in the drawings. And especially the last page with the historical context is really intresting!

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beautifully written and illustrated!

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this is awesome holy fuck

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this killed and died me amazing book wheres the movie

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I was shocked, most works- games and comics, are all weird unpolished underworked on queer stuff, but this work has REAL heart to it. I can really see the time you put into this. Awsome thanks for making this! The ending was really intresting, good pulp type story.

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THAT ENDING!!! THAT ENDING!! AAAAA

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SO GOOD!

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fantastic work

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Ooh I yelled aloud at one point, gosh this was well done. Recommended!

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Nice and professional work!
Story is short, but it's like i have read a some long book of some old, classic writer.
(For some reason, this comic has this feeling ).
As for the ending - it wasn't shocking and heart-breaking for me, because i was expecting something like this from the start.
From the start, it has a tragic feeling...
Especially good thing was historical researches, author made - all this info about neolithic-Jordan valley-ancient civilizations... that was really interesting and i greatly respect that. It doesn't play any role in the story, though.
(By the way - woman has a very brazilian appearance!)
So - thanks to the author!

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Very cool comic, I would love more adventures in the neolithic. :)

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Oh! This was great, this was really great.

This comic reads super well as a PDF and I adored the pacing-- it was so easy to follow scene from scene and I loved seeing our mains here interact and get to know each other. The ending is shocking and heart breaking and really leaves your mind to fill in a ton of blanks (which I love in a story) and GOSH HEY I just loved this comic; thanks a ton for sharing it!

And as a last note; it would be great if you could leave a small content warning  on this page? Nothing was particularly wild in this comic; but I believe some readers are sensitive to nudity/sex/violence so a sentence describing some of that stuff might be great in your description above-- if that's not too much trouble!

Really looking forward to anything else you might release here on Itchio~ Have an awesome day!

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added content warnings! thank you!

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good luck! i hope this comic does well <3